There’s a room in our house where no one goes. Fairly small, with a heavy wooden door that looks centuries old. Maybe if I looked closely enough I might even find characters from an extinct language, the things archaeologists only find in historic ruins or some such places. It’s a mystery, this room, that no one goes to. There are cobwebs around the huge iron padlock and no one knows where the key is. Not even Grandpa. He doesn’t like talking about the room, it makes him nervous and he starts mumbling something about the weather or the garden. We don’t have a garden, you see.
I have spent many summers drawing up elaborate plans to get inside the room. We are forbidden to talk about it or go near it, you know. My brother and I, both. My brother is as eager as me to know what’s inside, but he’s more eager about girls. Girls are horrible, I don’t talk to them. My best friend, Matt, doesn’t like girls either. That’s probably why we’re best friends. He helps me out with the plans these days, but I know it doesn’t mean as much to him as it means to me. I mean, its MY house and there is a room in MY house where no one goes.
One summer, we were repainting the house and I heard Father tell the painters to leave the room and paint the rest of the house. Why wouldn’t they paint that room? That day, when we were driving down to the local farmers’ market, I asked Father about the room. He braked so hard, I hit my head on the dashboard in-spite of the seat belt. I never brought up the room with him again. That day was the one time I saw fear in Father’s eyes. I asked Mother about it when we got home. There was an audible gasp and she dropped the cup she was holding. I was asked to go to my room and not come down till dinner time. Not even for my favorite show on TV! I wonder what made her so mad.
It made me very curious indeed, the room. The room that no one goes to. The room that no one talks about. The room that I think about all the time.
The plan I made last night is perfect. I found a way to unlock the broom-shed in the backyard, where Father keeps the ladder. When everyone is asleep tonight, I will use the ladder to reach up to the window of the room. There is a small hole in the windowpane on one side, like the hole a ball makes when it hits a window. I wonder who broke that pane. Maybe the ball that made it is still inside the room. I’ll look for it when I go inside.
I just have to wait now, till everyone falls asleep. And then I’ll enter that room. The room where no one goes. The one with the broken window and the big padlock. It doesn’t scare me, that room. Does it scare you?
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Oh golly. There’s a part two? Please say there’s a part two? Why does this keep happening to me? I stumble across these fantastic stories that grip my soul and…
(The comment is incomplete. Like the story)
Oh no..would it be suicidal to say I haven’t thought about Part 2 yet?
P.S: If this frustrates you, try reading Haruki Murakami’s ‘Blind willow, sleeping woman’ which is a collection of his short stories. I’m yet to understand why the heck he has to leave them all (yes, all!!) incomplete!
So what happens when
You don’t find the ball
But do find the hand-kerchief
The ball was wrapped in
Said silk initialed
‘P’?
Nice picturization. i could almost feel it happening.
i agree with princess. there should be a second part to this.
and ya, hows that collection of haruki murakami’s short stories. i desperately wanna get my hands on it, after reading ‘south of the border, west of the sun’ by him.
btw, i have linkd your blog to one of my posts. hope you dont mind that.
Spooky… Sometimes horror stories are more “horror” just because we don’t know how they end.
The story can just take a turn for a sad story just now, right?
You do write well, Priya. However, I want more from the storyline. Let us have a part two. Just for your blog readers. Leave a little room in your mind for it!
No, it’s going to turn happy. Not sad. Don’t listen to him. Part two is going to be full of sunshine and rainbows, treasure and lollipops. Right?
Part 2?
Grrr . . . .
Want the PART 2
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BPSK –
maybe..or maybe not!
PI –
Part 2 is up. and the short story collection is good..typical Murakami stuff. But if you’re the kind who enjoys a perfect conclusion, you would be disappointed!
Amey –
for me, most times, the story just writes itself. I’ve never actually spent time to orchestrate the story to reach a certain ending..weird!
Doc – Part 2 is up! as to the little room in my mind for anything, shouldn’t be a problem – the mind’s pretty vacant most of the time
Princess –
sorry! the story just wrote itself like it did in Part 2..I swear I didn’t do it on purpose!
Appu – yes yes, it’s up. Part 2.
Sukla –
stop grring now pls. and thx for dropping by!